ah, I was going to give you hell's worth of criticism for intentionally putting someone so beautiful under ugly, but I understand you're talking about her internal traits and personality. Truly a great piece of art, sir. Just like a rose and it's thorns...
One is never aware of the thorns, until they hold a rose too close.
even though you say you lit her badly, i really think it turn out amazing. since you can't see her eyes you really can't tell what she is "thinking," which at least for me draws my interest more.
One is never aware of the thorns, until they hold a rose too close.